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E,2 (Final)

May 30th, 2011, 4:52 pm

Average Rating: 5.00
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Author's Comments:

Reply digi300, May 30th, 2011, 4:53 pm

And thus, Created ends. My first solo done with. I would like to thanks those who stuck around this comic and make it successful. If it wasn't for you guys, I would of actually quit making these after about the 1st chapter.

Now, I must ask you guys a question: Why do you like this comic? Is it for the action, the characters, what? Saying it as just "its awesome" or "its epic" doesn't really count, unless you can't think of anything to say. I really want to know though.

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User's Comments:

Reply Ultimate the Hedgehog, May 30th, 2011, 4:57 pm

i thought the story was pretty good but the action was also intense.

though, i was hoping for mewtwo to hav more adventures.

Reply zachonator, May 30th, 2011, 4:59 pm

im a pokefan and i love action

Reply tekern, May 30th, 2011, 5:01 pm

I like it because of the determination you put into the comic,how you make every comic as if the end of the world was coming in the next 5 minutes and the last thing you want to do in your life is deliver this webcomic to us,and for that I thank you.

Reply Ninja Kitten XP, May 30th, 2011, 5:02 pm

this was a good comic! I liked it!

Reply copafire, May 30th, 2011, 5:17 pm

one word for this whole series: epic!

Reply Sonicboy The Hedgehog, May 30th, 2011, 5:23 pm

The action, the adventure, the characters, and everything that let up to the finish.

Reply Hero of Comedy, May 30th, 2011, 5:28 pm

Mewtwo's origin was one of my favorite tales, and adding a Sonic twist made me like it even more.

Reply RyoSoulreaper, May 30th, 2011, 5:57 pm

Mewtwo was one of my all time favorite pokemon when I was a kid. I read this expecting a carbon copy of the backstory of Mewtwo just with Sonic stuff, I was surprised at the characters. They where my favorite part. The plot was great too.

Good job.

Reply Kirbysmith [DJ], May 30th, 2011, 7:25 pm

Not sure why I started reading this. I'm not a Pokéfan, but I guess I got interested when I saw the hedgey Eggman.
But then as I was reading, I was thinking "Hey, this is a lot like {MUTE}! This is awesome!!!"

In one word, it was cool... but it could have been 20% cooler. *SHOT*

Reply Dallen9, May 30th, 2011, 8:07 pm

it's good... what will you do next is the question on the brain.

Reply WierdoGuy, May 30th, 2011, 8:16 pm

At the beginning I didn't like it, but the story, the characters and your effects were really cool, I'm just sad becuz' it's over (unlike my tests).

Reply Vye Brante, May 31st, 2011, 12:18 am

Hmm . . . How honest do you want me to be is the question?

I will start with this: I don't read many sprite comics. I don't because most of them tend to be too random to understand. This was clear and had an actual story going on. Clarity is a big thing with me so you got a lot of points there.

Characters were cute. However, most of them were either under used or not well established. A lot of the motivations didn't make sense. Especially Mewtwo's. Dr. Eggman almost kills Tails, then kidnaps Mewtwo, kills some of his friends, and then after Mewtwo gets away, he is still wondering if Eggman can be trusted? At no point did I ever buy into that dilemma.

Plot points were established and either dropped or not used. Crystal becomes his guardian angel, and does absolutely nothing. He gets kidnapped immediately after. Eggman has the ability to control Mewtwo. And doesn't do it other than one time. Mewtwo is losing against Eggman most of the time, and then gets in one hit and the fight's over.

Regardless of the issues, it still kept me entertained and reading throughout the whole thing. It could have been better if some things had been developed or used more, but for what it is, it's not bad. I hope you have learned a lot from this and will make an even better comic with your next attempt, (should you choose to do one.)

I am sure fans will jump on me for being slightly negative. Please do not take it personally or offensively. I merely point out flaws I see so they can be worked on. I still read it, and I wouldn't have done it if I didn't like it. So take that as you will.

Reply digi300, May 31st, 2011, 12:28 am

No no, its alright. With the things you pointed out, I will use it to improve. Thank you very much for pointing out the flaws ^^

Reply Vye Brante, May 31st, 2011, 1:07 am

Good. I am glad you can take criticism well as not everyone can. There is still a lot of good here. I wish you luck in future works. I'd be interested in reading more!

Reply Ghostly Banette, May 31st, 2011, 5:07 am

Why i liked it. I liked this comic because of the characters. I liked the effects also.

Reply HyperTurtle32, May 31st, 2011, 12:13 pm

I liked the effects, the story, the characters. If there's a squeal, I'm reading it.

P.S. Is that a pikachu in the last panel?

Reply Ghostly Banette, May 31st, 2011, 1:05 pm

looks more a golden L floating in the sky...Of course! Mewtwo is in the World of Letters!

Reply Cliff 133, May 31st, 2011, 4:47 pm

I'm fairly certain it's Mewtwo, or mabie Mew the original. the tail and shape give it away.

Reply greenblur101, May 31st, 2011, 5:26 pm

Honestly i luv this comic becuz of how it is. It gives off a unique sense in a comic that makes me love it. This comic brings a great drama action comdeny scene in it that not only makes me like it, but love it. all in all i rate it 5/5 even the effects were top notch

Reply Tanokki, June 1st, 2011, 2:42 pm

The writing sold me on it.

Reply Jerdude14487, July 12th, 2011, 2:17 pm

The plot and storyline was great. plus there were great characters. I say you keep it going with the adventure after the previous of Mewtwo

Reply Plazmaz, July 26th, 2011, 9:20 pm

It's ovvvver

Reply Mist the Moonhunter, October 27th, 2011, 2:29 am

this is a terrible conclusion

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